There are days of happiness,
There are days of sorrow,
But all we have to know,
Is the truth we have to swallow.
We have so many things to do in life,
Some we do, for many we strive,
We have got one life to live,
But some have a life to die.
Call it a game of nature,
Or a virtue of deeds,
We live to gain a stature,
But we die to quench our Needs.
There are times in life,
When we never feel our breath,
And thats the time, my friend,
When we are stuck in between Life and Death...
There are days of sorrow,
But all we have to know,
Is the truth we have to swallow.
We have so many things to do in life,
Some we do, for many we strive,
We have got one life to live,
But some have a life to die.
Call it a game of nature,
Or a virtue of deeds,
We live to gain a stature,
But we die to quench our Needs.
There are times in life,
When we never feel our breath,
And thats the time, my friend,
When we are stuck in between Life and Death...
.
ReplyDeletenice man! great start!! keep it up :)
ReplyDeletefollowed + will look forward to more posts!
cheers!! :D
Yanz thanks
ReplyDeleteSAM bhai: Thanks a lot....yeah sure this motivates me for more....:)
ey mudeet.. denny here.. nice one.. ideas nicely placed together..
ReplyDeletelooking forward to read more.. :)
thanks denny... :)
ReplyDeleteWell, that was pretty ironic. Not what I was expecting at all. I dunno how deep you want me to delve into with this, but considering it's a blog, I'd say this: If you want people to be truly interested in this you're gonna have to fish them out of brackish water. In a shot, make it more personal, more relate-able, more real. But, all in all, a good first post :)
ReplyDeleteVERY IMPRESSIVE , TRULY AWESOME :))
ReplyDeleteout of this world dear ...........i m short of words today really deep n meaningful
ReplyDeleteNice thought you have.... keep it up... Good...
ReplyDelete@ ABBY: Agreed...it will come with time....I will put the personal touch soon....
ReplyDelete@ SWEETY: Thanks
@ AABHA: Thanks a lot
@ PALLAVI: THanks
my pleasure :)))
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